
I had nothing before, then I had you
I was denying, now I refuse
I've never been young, you'll never grow old
I never made sense but now I disturb
You're my illusion, my pattern of wrong
A hollow idol on the tip of my tongue
You were made for me by mistake
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At first, I saw this majestic building which looked like it was raised on the top of the world. Its beauty reinforced even more by the intense lights outshined the background and even its surrounding...
The view emanated with such peaceful , calm and melancholic mood... I saw no stars though. I even added a song which, I thought, fit the scenery but...
Today, as I look at this picture again, I see something different.
I've noticed all the people present there. I see a place which is vibrant of life and positive energy... and I see how much inapropirate is the ''Silent Moon'' song in here. There is no peace, and no silence! I can almost hear the voices of people mixing together in the cool air.. I've even noticed a star on the sky! (or whatever it is, on the left side) So these are the two different visions of the same place...
I like the bright colours which contrast with the dark background. However, I would experiment some more with the red tones in this photo. I do understand that it's your vision and I respect that. It looks gorgeous, but I'm just curious of the possible effect, which would come into being...
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